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                                                                   By: Andrea Quezada


                    Bathrooms close at HMS. Bathrooms were destroyed guy would be grabbing there excrement  and smearing it on the wall. Girls would be kissing the mirrors,acting like there adults thinking there so cool and popular. It all started in 6th grade boys would think there thought like actuarial fighters. We're weren't able to use the bathrooms until they finally thought that it was time to see if they could handle it again. Our teachers always had to check on us after lunch mostly that's the time were the guys fight. One of the guy teachers from 7A would go into the boys bathroom and examine what they were doing and then go outside and wait until they got out. Two girl teachers would wait outside the girls bath room. Mostly the girls are supposed to be cleaner then the boys but it's the girls like kissing the mirrors. Someone who was in 6th grade who someone knew would kiss the mirror. She would put lip stick and kiss the. Mirror to be honest to me that was disgusting.
These two girls told me "we should out on lips stick and kiss the mirror".
Someone else said " no that's disgusting" they had told "your lame, your not cool." She really didn't care what they say about her. She backed off and she went to go tell the teacher about what was going on in the bathroom. Not letting the HMS students not using the bathroom is great it teaches them how to be more responsible








                                              The Worst thing my Dad told Me


  August 9,2014 it was a beautiful day I woke up in a good mood,then it went downhill from there. I got out of my bed went to go make breakfast for the family.I went to my room to go wake up my niece. "Good morning sunshine" I told her." Why did you wake me up early." She yelled. "Do you want pancakes or not!" I said. Right when I said that she got up and went to the kitchen. The I woke up the rest for my family. My dad and my brother in law went to work and my mom was at Mexico. We had a good breakfast that was like the first time we ever had a good breakfast. Later after that we went outside to go play. My niece and me were playing volleyball and my nephews were playing football and then soccer. We were outside for good 1hr and 30min.When we finish playing outside my sister went to go get us McChicken from McDonalds. We were really hungry I was like trying to find a snack, my sister was taking hours. Finally my sister walked in with food we all ran up to her. We liked like hungry hippos. There was fries and chips with soda and juice. Later when we finished my sister had rented movie's from the RedBox we were watching Rio 2. It was funny my family was laughing I was too we had lots of fun.




Later my dad came also my brother in law Mari my sister she was making them food. She made this spicy food its like with meet and peppers I don't know but for me it didn't look too good. They ate they were talking for a long time. My dad calls he starts talking to me say that what he says would change me and he understands if I get really mad at him. I told him " whats going on..." " It's been a long time since i've been keeping this secret from your brother and your other sister Adi, your mom, and you" My dad said " what happened" I said in a scared voice. He told me " You have other brothers and sisters." When he told me that I was started crying he asked me if he could bring them next week. I got up and walked away,he repeated his question I answered him saying I don't care with a mean voice. My dad told me it was my choice I told him I guess but I was really mad. I found out why my mom didn't want to be with him anymore and that caused all our problems.




After that my dad finally brought then and they were nice my half brother was called Thomas and one of my half sister is called Precious we had a party we had some yummy food. Then precious and Priscilla and Krystal and me went to sunshine park. We had fun we played in the sand and then we saw my my best friend/ brother Christian and he came over to me and we were talking for a bit then we left and well my dad left.Then later Precious was being me to me so the next day I told my dad what she was saying she told me that she was fat because my sisters fat but my sisters like that because she was pregnant with four kids it's called baby fat. So I told my dad and he went to go talk to her and she got in trouble and both of them left and that was the last time I say them.Some times it's cool to have others brothers and sisters but of course there going to be different then your real family there you family too treat them with respect.